Wednesday 3 August 2011

Write on Wednesday - The clock winked

The clock winked .... but that's just what it looked like. Her tears had actually blurred her vision and as she blinked a tear out, the clock winked at her.
Cheeky bugger, she thought.
It was as if the clock were mocking her. Reminding her  "time flies when you're having fun". Well, this was not her idea of fun.
Growing up was SO HARD. It was meant to be fun, wasn't it... being a kid?
Then why was everything so hard?
"I don't want to grow up if this is what it's like" she had told her Mum. She had been crying then too, while Mum rubbed her legs for her. They ached terribly. Growing pains, everyone told her.
What a horrible way to grow up.

This was inspired by my gorgeous daughter and a real conversation we had.
Linking up for W.O.W with ink paper pen

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Write On Wednesdays Exercise 8 - The clock winked...Write the words "The clock winked" at the top of your page. Set a timer for 5 minutes. Write the first words that come into your head after the prompt. Stop when the buzzer rings. Do this exercise over and over if you wish. Write beyond 5 minutes if you like, you can link it up as an extra post.

4 comments:

  1. Fantastic use of real life, Melissa. I like the last line: What a horrible way to grow up. A nice little snippet and an interesting use of the prompt

    Gill x

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  2. Oh my heart breaks! Those nights of trying to comfort my girl and her just not understanding why she was hurting. You captured it perfectly. Thank you for sharing!

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  3. Aw, bless her. Nice melding of prompt with real life.

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  4. My eight year old daughter experiences the same thing. Heartbreaking isn't it? You captured the emotion of the little girl really well.

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